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Yester night’s great Plight

Yester night I had great plight.
I stuck in there and put up a fight.
I kept shaking uncontrollably,
And I felt suicidal.  I didn’t
Attempt to hurt myself.  I fought the Feeling. 
Slowly I’m healing. 
But still…

I’m tired of shaking.
I’m tired of my heart breaking.
I’m over him.  Of that I’m sure.
With God’s help I’ll endure.

Yes, I’ll endure these tough times.
I’ll keep my head up.
I’ll sneak in a smile or two.
I at times feel like giving up.
But the Bible says: “He that has endured
to the end is the one that will be saved.” (Matthew 24:13)
But still…

I’m so tired of uncontrollably shaking.
I’m tired of my heart uncontrollably breaking.
I’m getting over him.  Of that I’m sure.
After praying for Jehovah Gods help we’ll surely endure.

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  • darlee77 gold member
    November 6

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    Very emotional and powerful. Shows strength and determination. Very good.

  • Macsword
    November 5

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    Always best

    to stay within the protection of God's strength and endurance. We are no match for that, but God will always lend us His strength. Good write poet.


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    November 4

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    Bountiful~Wise...

    Intriguing... "Yester night’s great Plight" is striking... Emotions abound and actions are felt. I liked what I read.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

  • Papagallo
    November 4

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    Ahh, never give up. Yes, there are more fish in the sea. Someone that hurt you is not worth your tears. Believem me, been there before. Yes, get over and know that there is indeed someone there for you. Take care, Papagallo