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Bruce Nolls

Around the circle we must go
like a river winding with an endless flow
None can stop this thing called death
It takes all until there's nothing left
Tears from loved ones start to fall
Wanting them back, an endless call
No more shall anyone see their face
With the angels they've been taken to grace
Starting over and starting new
Moving on is all you can do

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Bruce Nolls Died 7-31-08

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  • Cermionie
    November 12

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    This is really good. It shows the bitter sweet side of death, and how there's no avoiding it, so we must accept. The emotion behind the poem really shows through, and the rhyme is really great. The poem is easy to read and just flows beautifully, much like a river. Nicley done.

  • Simply Just Me
    November 6
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    Death comes to us all. The only thing we can control is the state death finds us.