Understand my pain
As I lay down in the pouring rain
Looking around for someone to touch
The love I had from you was never too much
But now that it's gone
I need a crutch
Someone to help me
So I can stand
If being weak is a flaw
Call me less than a man...
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Another old one that I found...it's probably over three years old ...like when I first started writing....
What did you think
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like this good job
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I still like your old stuff! <333
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creative rhyming pattern. love stinks huh?
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It stinks indeed, yet all the pain we've felt from it still makes us seek it out...yet again, once more..
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you think we'd learn...
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