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Rise of the Phoenix

Unbreakable
Unshakeable
My presence is unmistakeable
Can't employ me, you can't destroy me
I don't do trade so you cant deploy me
Disrespect will only fuel my vendetta
My words are bullets that shoot out my baretta
I'm rare so you could say im a collectible
Can't see me on your radar, Im undetectable
I spit deadly venom,so i guess i'm injectable
I set my visions out so my thoughts are projectable
Call me Apocalypse i'll wipe out the nation
My words flow freely so i never get constipation
Lyrical H1N1 cant annihilate me
Even my enemies don't want to deflate me
Not admitting they're awaiting me
Knowing its useless to keep on hating me
Powers of influence deeper than the eye can see
Words that will burn into your soul to the third degree
Many tried to match but got scorned by reality
You cant measure up to my originality
Like Mortal Combat it ends in a bloody fatality
I'll show no mercy, that just my personality
Rhymes that will leave you numb like anesthetic
Kinda like what chocolate does to a diabetic
I know the world aint ready to see this
But i'm letting it be known
Beware
The rise of the Phoenix






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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    November 6

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    excellent!!! your rhyming was flawless. I really liked what this piece had to say. Great job poet. keep that ink flowing. T^hanks for sharing this.
    peace and light,
    Kendal


  • Lady Purple
    November 4
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    snaps snaps snaps...........gud one