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Torn Sunrise

Black, was the dawn, average in this sortof of withdrawn scorn
I wished nothing but the best for you, a broken heart was what was returned
I fought, i lost my home, and you, threw it all away
I gave you everything, in return, nothing

A broken heart and Torn Sunrise
Like the end, human demise
Distrust them all, but trust in love
but this love, is not like a dove
but like a gun, fully loaded and ready for fire
just waiting for someone to pull the trigger and end it all

Words are stronger, than any two edged blade
and these words will surley send me to my grave

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  • nightrose89
    November 11
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    W-O-W...i'm speechless


  • windsong721
    November 10

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    Incredible!

    I really feel the power in this piece. Im really impressed with the fluidity of how the truth flows thru the words to the soul. Im feelin ya lol..thanks so much for sharing this with us!
    Windsong