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As I Stand in the Mist

~As I stand in the mist of
The shower
I think of
All the crap that is
Going on in my life

As I stand in the mist of
The shower
I think of
All the people
Who piss me off

As I stand in the mist of
The shower
I think of that razor

As I stand in the mist of
The shower
I feel that razor
Against my skin

As I stand in the mist of
The shower
I feel the blood
Drip, drip, dripping
Down my legs

As I lay in the mist of
The shower
I no longer feel
And no longer think~

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