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Fire Burning

I've got this fire burning
way down deep inside.
Deep inside my honey pot
waiting for a big cock to collide.

It's like a drug for me
and I need my fix.
I'm tired of trying
with rubber dicks.

When I think sexual interaction
my nipples get hard and strain against my bra.
Begging for a touch or pinch
or to be sucked raw.

My honey pot well
it's becomes juicy and wet.
I have to go to the restroom
and give her a little pet.

I've got this fire burning
it's been so long for me.
But caution if you touch
for your burns are of the first degree.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Bruce silver member
    November 11

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    Wow! This poem contains some of your hottest and most erotic work, finely written. My only suggestion would be to take another look at the last line, which I thought was not as strong as the rest. But overall, it's wonderful!!!


    • sensualbutterfly
      November 12
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      Thanks Bruce. I appreciate your comment. I have thought about the last lines several times but cannot come up with anything else, so I'm gonna leave it that way


  • gllarso
    November 5
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    Mmmmmm...I would risk the burn to get a piece of you!!! HOT HOT HOT!!! Love it!!

    -Garrett


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 5

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    Your fire is out of control I have been this way to many times. When I have gone for a while without my passion takes over. I loved every word in this very hot. I hope that honey pot gets what it needs. SH


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 4

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    The words HOT HOT HOT comes to mind
    My sensual your wings are sizzling this morning
    Excellent penning and a creative choice of words..watch out for that driiping hot honey pot, it may just burn ya....David


    • sensualbutterfly
      November 4
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      *hugs* thanks so much David!! It's burning right through my skin! lol Thanks for the great comment. I always appreciate your opinion

  • mcfreeman
    November 4
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    Explosive....

    poetry of the best kind...


  • carl dunford
    November 4
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    Hot Hot Hotter!!!! Baby this is one fire I don't mind getting burnt by.
    In fact I am willing to get my lips burnt lol!!!!!


    • sensualbutterfly
      November 4

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      Then come here and prepared to get burned! Willing to sacrifice the lips! That's my kind of man! Thanks baby for the comment


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 4

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    Wow, and double that that is the kind of fire thay spreads from one person to another, esp with words like this, keep it flowing

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