Cuddled together safe and secure
Our bond will last through the coming years
Joined as one under Gods decree
“Until death do us part” has no meaning to me
Forever and a day you will always be mine
Our love is not bounded by time
When our earthly jobs are complete
Your warm embrace I will still seek
On that day when God gathers us near
I’ll kiss you and whisper, “We’re home my dear”
A contest entry
- BluesMans Soul Muse Contest # 1 by BluesMan.
1750 points, ends December 11, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love this poem, its beautifull the words say so much about your love for this person, well done
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A very sweet and tender write. A loving promise to someone you carry in your heart. Very good poem.
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I do like this. It is romantic and true. I felt emotional when reading it which indicates to me that the poem holds the elements reqired for this picture. Well done Cathy.
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Brilliant penning
Splendid rhyme and I love the message that you send..
"“Until death do us part” has no meaning to me"
This is so orignal but after reading your write is makes perfect sense
GREAT JOB!.. wish you the very best..love & light David
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Oh wow! This is another great write. Every single entry I've read in this contest has been amazing. You did a great job with the prompt. Keep up the great writing and good luck in the contest!!
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excellent
Great poem
Love this...
Blending God's faith along with Love
Sounds like two good combinations to me
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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