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Looking Thru The Window

Ignoring the music that I chose,
drifting with my thoughts
thru the window.
I turn back to see the curtains close,
knowing that you are happy
to see me go.
Now that I'm outside looking back at you,
I can see your face
so very clearly.
Trying to convince you my love was true,
I know understand your choice
not to hear me.
Life was not meant to be a fairytale,
no matter how much
we wished it.


 

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