Oh love you blow so far away
when once the heart felt safe,
now lost between the sun and moon
forever passion's waif.
Yet once forever was a star
that glowed through galaxies,
a pinprick in the distance now
and love's a fallacy.
And as the sun would slowly set
a coldness seeps around,
that warmth of heart has disappeared
to wear confusion's frown.
Then softness of the moon now rose
in colours pale yet fine,
within that gentle changing time
was sent oh saddest sign.
From far above and far away
a teardrop reached the soul
and love that felt such glory once
no longer could console.
Author notes
I FELT THE GOLDEN TEAR FROM HER EYE
title and pic are your prompts
In a list
A contest entry
- I FELT THE GOLDEN TEAR FROM HER EYE by Swan song.
900 points, ended November 7, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I enjoyed this very much well done!!!!
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Just beautiful. It flows so sweetly and
eloquently. I think you captured the prompt
beautifully. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Solid write
an excellent piece for this prompt poet, but would be a picture even without the one attending. Good words here.
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Wonderful rhyme and word choices/phrases! Great interpretation of the prompt! Very nice write! Best of luck with contest.
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Excellent
What a beautiful write. So perfect for the picture. And so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest
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