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On Idyllic Junctures

Idyllic juncture's amorous simper
Inspires rapport beyond the realms of chance,
Sustained with gestures, fits love's narrator;
And so begins the pure, enticing dance.
Forget things past and repudiate reserve,
Then emulate the mien atop the queue.
The cynosure exposes both to verve
Adorned with psychedelic deja vu,
But the inert inheritance deters
Beside inapropos designs of fate.
The so desired cadency incurs
Foreboding now that it might dissipate.
          Despite the blemished groove to soothing rest,
          Abiding mettle proves to be the test.

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