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Say Goodbye

Broken smile
starless sky
forget it all
say goodbye.

No more fighting
no more tears
one decision
to end thirteen years.

When you wake
I'll be in heaven
take a deep breath
and count to seven.

Don't cry for my loss
don't cry for me
it is the choice
to set my spirit free.

I'll be gone
in a better place
this is the last goodbye
the last time you'll see my face.

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  • peterh360
    November 19
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    dont kill urself u no wat its lyk wen ur friend did it du u want to do that to all ur friends and family ok


  • pieces.of.me.
    November 4
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    Grwat poem and i really hope your not serious...


    • xxxfallen angelxxx
      November 4
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      i wish i was. kinda. like i want 2 die but at the same time i dont.


      • pieces.of.me.
        November 4
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        i know exactly what you mena :/ it sucks cuz ur like so sick of all of this but like for me i want afuture and i wanna get married and like i could never leave my BF behind...