I know what it's like,
Stuck in a maze,
Can't find the end,
Always wondering,
Never certain.
I know what it's like,
The tears,
The heartache,
The pain,
I know,
Its neverending.
I know what it's like,
overwelming paranoia,
nightmares and screams,
insomnia,
tired eyes.
I know what it's like,
The feeling of being alone,
The feeling of being broken,
Seems like no one sees,
Like no one cares.
I know what it's like,
Don't wanna wake up,
Don't wanna face reality,
Don't wanna accept the truth.
I know what it's like,
Praying for an escape,
Wishing for it all to just end.
Wanting to give up,
Wanting to back down,
Yet we keep on fighting.
I know what it's like,
You don't have to worry,
I know what it's like,
Your so not alone.
feedback would be wonderful :]
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well ... i know what all these emotions feel like...this relates to all somehow somewhere... brilliant write ...kudios to you for writing this piece .
cheers
shilpa
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thank you so much :]
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You showed beautiful empathy in this for the pains of others, good job!
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thank for taking the time to read my poems!! :]
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aw, this is amazing. (: it's so true.. and i can relate to it so well. i love the last stanza, but it's all reaaaaally good! great job!
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thank ya hun!
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aw, this is beautiful. i think the last line could be changed to something like "you're far from alone" or something like that but besides that, it's really great =)
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yes it defintaly could use some work :] thank youuu!
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I love love this. I love that you reach everyone, on some level
And how you really do show, that you're there too. That you've bee there.
"I know what it's like,
Praying for an escape,
Wishing for it all to just end.
Wanting to give up,
Wanting to back down,
Yet we keep on fighting."
Favorite lines. They hit home <3
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aw thank you so much, i really appreciate it! :]
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