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Nothing Human


Cold fingers grip you
a heart stop pumping

wet eyes plead you
full now of nothing

words besiege you
between fits of coughing

foreboding hits you
but you are laughing

pity is beneath you
the breath is halting

emotions kill you
the human acting.

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  • amnouup
    November 4

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    Nice description

    A nice description of human terror and its fragile nature, well done :-)
    best wishes,
    Mou