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the things i do for you

i told you i loved you
and ive never lied to you
i told you i needed you
and i told you the truth
my mind misses you
my body craves you
my emotions are crazy over you
my heart loves you too
my soul smiles on you
my blood rushes at the sight of you
my breath catches
when you get so near
when you speak
its all i hear
when your body and mine
are molded as one
my vision blurs
the the fire's begun
my fingertips burn
as they touch your skin
my eyes see only you
every chance they get
they look into your eyes
seeing the passion
that reflects my own need
i love you
and always will
but you dont love me
and its my soul that you've killed.

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  • love-or-lose
    November 23
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    Oooh I love this! This is awesome! Ha i can't even name a favorite part its all awesome! Great job