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The Smile of Smita (Mirror Acrostic)

The power of every human lies in the hearT
Heart made of stone, hard yet soft in flesH
Edifying and guiding one to its very purposE

Shadows eclipse our lucid life many a timeS
Most people carry on smiling through theM
In a moment when life is stunted like bonsaI
Lost in a world when their life is found in fulL
Every moment valued and worries left alonE

Optimistic of carefree tomorrows, free alsO
Free of the darkness, far from trouble’s whifF

Such is the air of my dearest friend’s missuS
Merry, happy, at peace and her own charM
Infinitely blessed, with no reason for an alibI
Time of rest: a man to love, a baby at breasT
A woman, complete, happy, smiling: SmitA





HAPPY BIRTHDAY SMITA, GOD BLESS

Dubai, November 2009

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My friend Praveen's wife, Smita celebrates her birthday tomorrow, the 5th of November.

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  • amnouup
    November 4
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    Nice mirror acrostic

    Nice mirror acrostic with beautiful meaning :-)
    best wishes,
    Mou


  • Andi. gold member
    November 4
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    very cool form
    I like it
    and happy birthday to Smita!