a bodiless snake did aproach me today
asking if i might let him into my heart
i ran in fear, trying to find a safety net
but instead i found a dark room, empty
don't ever let the cold snakes get to me
i beg of you, keep me in your great arms
keep their venomous chill from my back
keep the light on, that i may find sleep
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i literally had towrite this three time to make it not rhyme... let me know what you think...
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nice
i like it, a bit off topic from your title...but i'm guessing that's what you were aiming for? i have to admit when i saw the title then read it, it was kind of mindboggling... thumbs up!
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haahaa, thanks!! i kind of like the name off topic from the poem... but i might change it to keep everyone happy, lol.
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but if you change it doesn't it defeat the purpose of surprising the person?
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haahaa, your logic is infallable. very well, blue gatorade it shall remain^.^ i'm sooooooo glad you like it!!!!
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miki is gettin better and better
.....really nice write princess...keep posting
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Nice...it was good...i'm not really into rhyme anyway
Its hard sleeping with the light on lol
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not for me. i can't sleep if it's off though... i'm scared of the dark XD i have to be hugging a stuffed animal or drinking blue gatorade to calm down.. lol (hence the name!) anyways, i'm glad you like it! i naturally rhyme, so these are alot harder for me.
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its very nice... but why is the tittle blue gatorade?
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haahaa, it doesn't make any sence except to me, i'll message it to you so other people don't think i'm psychotic!!
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not really you are awesum
^_^
and she will be loved!!
lol i dono y but i recalled that song reading your reply .. 
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your so cute ricky!!! glad you like the poem^.^
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