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smell of soil

early rain on spring
no hail storms and no lightnings
just smell of soil
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falling autumn leaves
resembling  my ardent  hopes
slowly to fade on
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heavy cold and snow
to cool the tempers ahead
and to invite warmth
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  • Shantti silver member
    November 21
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    I love the variety of seasons. I really enjoyed everyone of them. The imagery is wonderful, and that last one almost gave me a chill. Lovely, thank you for entering