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The funny Monster (limerick)

This monster likes to jump,
but he has a big fat lump,
he likes to dance,
a pull down his pants,
and fall down with a bump!

This monster is so sad,
because his mother had been mad,
because he burnt the fish,
and broke the dish,
and been waking up his dad!

This monster is at school,
his teacher says he's a fool,
the students yell,
and monster tries to tell,
but the teacher just acts like a bull.

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  • suecat
    November 4

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    I feel sorry for the poor Monster! A good image of him not getting things quite right, so we feel some sympathy for him, even if he is a 'monster'.

  • refinnej
    November 4

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    oh poor little monster...nothing is going right and everyone is so mean to him haha