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The Love The Heart Seeks

The first moment we met
My whole heart has been set
With your presence I’m captivated
The shadow of my sorrow has ended

Filled with dark malice
Embraced by your innocence
I feel this very heavy gravity
With the hands of such great serenity

Seeking such small light of love
Your heart, I always wanted to have
My heart is devoured by cold darkness
You set me free with your kindness

My life filled with grief
In such an encounter of mischief
But delight you always bring
And calmed my life as if spring

The words that caress
Can I believe on what she says?
I don’t want this love to be a fantasy
Together let us make this a reality.

When you say you love me
I was down in my knee
Because I didn’t think it was meant for me
My world has stopped and now I could no longer foresee

As a moment is spent each other
I wanted to live my life with you forever
Although this is truly impossible
But it may as well for me be probable

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  • savemysoul
    November 5
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    this is good. nice love poem. very romantic and sweet. good job and thanks for taking the time to enter.

    -- jordan.