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God Help Me

For I am lost
Lost in a moment where I can't see
I feel unloved and appreciated in life by some people
which I know not in your eyes
I feel as If I don't exist and doesn't matter
I want to feel loved and appreciated by some people in life
Not as if I'm stressing them out
I'm sorry mom if you feel that I do that to you

For I need you dearly
I don't know where eles to go
For someone that wants to work things out with me
I guess he having a moment or something
I just stay clear for a while
I do hope he is alright
Hold him near and close to your wings

Stay close and near to me
Don't let me fall
It seems in other eyes I'm not what I should be in life
I'm just simply here and trying to find my way
Be with me in very special way
I just have to take life one day at a time
Amen

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  • My Bubbles...

    "I don't know where eles to go
    For someone that wants to work things out with me."

    I wish I could come get you- go on vacation- you could bring a friend, or your Mom!
    I am still in pain over this man's power over you. I do not wish anything bad for him. I just wish he'd get LOST.

    As for people wanting you to be MORE than you are? LOSERS. You are glorious in the eyes of God. I am here for you. OK?

    Love and kisses to the sweetest girl I KNOW!!!
    -Dad


  • hershey101
    November 4

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    i really luv it and it expresses hw u feel i like the last part very fasnicated and wonderful and srry dat u feel that way best of luck!! Great poem tho!!


  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    November 4

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    I glad I read this. I love the second to last line. We must take life one day at a time. That is what Jesus said in the book of Matthew in a summarization. Thanks for sharing.