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Lost in You

All of these years
I've been counting the tears
Trying to find the greatest fear
In my heart

And in all of these years
I've found what I've been missing
I've found what my heart was wishing

In you

Lost in your eyes
I speak nothing
Lost in your touch
I hear nothing
Lost in your voice
I see nothing
Lost in you
I fear nothing

Except losing you

Just promise me
You'll never leave
Just tell me that
You'll be here
When I wake…

Tomorrow

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  • cheshirecat024
    November 9

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    i love this! its exactly how i felt at the beginning of my realtionship...too bad its not ending that way....lol
    all in all, great job.


  • Br0kEn WiNgS
    November 9
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  • Not-The-Sun silver member
    November 8

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    I fear nothing

    Except losing you

    Just promise me
    You'll never leave
    Just tell me that
    You'll be here
    When I wake…

    Tomorrow




  • The Fox.
    November 5

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    You're adorable. She's lucky

  • shali11
    November 4
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    touchyyyyyy

    i love dz.soo tru evn 4 me

  • 4got the clappies

    Sorry about that =p

  • Heartfelt

    I loved this poem Cor... It shows how scary loving someone can be, when you don't know if when they say they love you too they mean it as much as You, and when the world seems perfect because they love you, and that realization only makes you realize what the world would be like if they did not. Great job!
    Love
    Julianna

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