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Three entries for this contest
I wrote and had to scrap.
The best that I could muster was just a load of crap
so I gave up the struggle, snuggled down to take a nap.

But as my eyes were closing, dozing on my bed,
there came a faint tap-tapping, loud rapping in my head,
it was my Muse " Quit napping and let me in" she said.

And so, instead of dozing,
I began composing
the lines that you've just read.

A contest entry

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  • GotLilt
    November 11

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    This is hysterical and familiar. My muse jerks me around too!

  • bballer21
    November 4

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    woahh i loved this. the end did surprise me! i love the rhyme and this was a truly wonderful write! good luck in the contesttt ! keep on writing!
    ~~allie.


  • Amera gold member
    November 4

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    This is delightful! Oh what fun! So your muse is a girl huh?
    LOL My muse is a guy in fact I once wrote a poem about him
    in the bath tub with me. hehe.... Love your poem my friend!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • PurringKitten silver member
    November 4

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    I Love It what a perfect little rhyme for a contest...snappy and can see your muse won this
    thanks kindly for sharing with me and good luck in the contest

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