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The Shower.


Vaporized aqua, mist from fountain head
Pit-a-pat rat-a-tat on complexion.
Warmth envelopes human well being
Saturated illusive reflections.

Soft sponge dapples tender pigmentation
A droplet descends from hair to shoulder
Flows from each vertebra, anticipation
To meander explore treasured places.

Liquid diamonds flutter amongst the haze
Scented white bubbles all come forth to play
Amorous thoughts a romantic interlude
Memories transfixed away from reality.

Warmth purity smooth relaxation
inspire within self-satisfaction. 

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  • Bob Fox
    November 5

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    Oh yes

    The wonder and glory of a nice warm shower. Perhaps at time better then sex. and damn it never has a headache poet. Sharpe and witty indeed.


  • Omenta Piccolina
    November 4
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    Very nice. Cant wait to read more.

  • amysticwriter silver member
    November 4
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    Beautiful ... sensually simulating indeed...


  • happy kitty kat
    November 4

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    very good

    "Soft sponge dapples tender pigmentation
    A droplet descends from hair to shoulder
    Flows from each vertebra, anticipation
    To meander explore treasured places." very descriptive. very nice. good poem