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The Old Man

Chastised by his dad
Unhappy little lad
Off them rocks
Down to the beach
Enjoyment taken
Out of reach

Remember when
You were that lad
Remember words
From your own dad

I’ll never be
That man I cry
I am him now
I can’t deny

I’ll play with him
I’ll make him happy
To be with me
Like I was daddy

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