"what is heart break like" She asked.
"Its like an arctic monkeys song," He said, taking a long drag on his cigarette.
"At first, the only thing good about it, is that its something new, something easy to process, rhythmic, And especially in the case of never feeling it before, your not sure what your feeling. or hearing, or tasting, or why your thinking about what your tasting while your listening to music."
The young girl looked confused but continued to swirl her dress as she walked down the sidewalk.
"Then, after about the first thirty seconds, your just kind of...waiting for it to be over. But its so horrible that it never really ends. It just kinda... goes on forever....all loud and fast and British...."
"heart break is a loud, fast, British, shitty, alternative rock song?"
He laughed, he got the car door for her, and before he closed it, he said:
"yeah, except its really shitty."
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Sounds authentic, but I'm so old-fashioned I get hung-up with the lack of apostrophes and other missing punctuation. Guess I'm just too old for your style.
