really doubted his intentions
after plying her with so many rounds
beer and cider, vodka shorts.
how many were there she wasn't sure
told her stories of days of old,
filled her head with random stories.
confused her with his guile and praise
told his stories weaved more lies.
cheerful, creepy,clumsy and vain
he weaved his vile and cunning plan.
drawn in by his snake like eyes
hypnotised mousey in his web,
he charmed her now for all his worth,
until his game had run its course.
always got what he wanted,
a childish man with no remorse
cold stone heart no emotions.
never knowing he was crazy
she walked right into his playtime zone.
he stayed calm a he drew her in
closer,tighter caged his mousey.
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Ah very well written, you did an excellent job with the word bank. Great job on this and best of luck to you in the contest
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Wow good job!
Great imagery.
'cheerful, creepy,clumsy and vain
he weaved his vile and cunning plan.
drawn in by his snake like eyes
hypnotised mousey in his web,'
These are such great lines,
You have great talent
Love
Sonya
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D@YMN
..this was from a word bank
..very impressive
brilliant penning..loaded imagery with real raw emotions..love the many metaphors as well..these two lines rock
"drawn in by his snake like eyes
hypnotised mousey in his web,"
Grrrrrrr8 penning..Write On!..wish you the best
David 
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Could you put your AP name in your notes? thanks
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