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A midsummer dream

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There is a place,a secret place
where voices whisper in the leaves,

they've told me of a wonderous land,

where no one's sad or ever grieves.

 

breeze gently blew, I closed my eyes

there where the dappled sunlight played,

when I awoke, I was amazed

for I was dressed in rich brocade.

 

An elf that stood quite near me

said,"we must hurry, it is late

the ceremony will begin

precisely on the stroke of eight".

 

He took my hand, then we raced

through flowers that grew everywhere,

and when we reached the toadstool glade

all I could do was stand and stare.

 

Titania stood in bridal gown,

forget-me-knots twined in her hair,

and Oberon stood by her side,

I swear he looked so debonair.

 

But voices now were calling me,

and I awoke beneath a tree.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Bluemonday silver member
    November 5
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    I could have closed my eyes also and imagined that perfect peaceful scene..Oh how we'd all love to find such a place...Dan

  • Purrsanthema
    November 4
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    Oh how beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 The spare details draw the scene with no artificiality and such rich natural splendor!


  • malmadre gold member
    November 4

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    Magical. I love the thought of that secret place. Ah! the places that we travel to in our dreams, this is what poetry thrives on. Imaginative and spellbinding.

  • this is so sweet, what a beautiful dream,
    wish there was such a place a wonderland.
    " where no one's sad or ever grieves "
    that would be so nice.
    you have a very lovely piece of poetry here,
    very enjoyable

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    joyce


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 4

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    SO SWEET AND LOVELY!!!!

    Such are the sweet and happy dreams one has while falling asleep underneath a beautiful tree in the warmth of summertime.


  • Tirrell
    November 4

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    Beauty in the lines...

    There is such a sweet mealody to these lines I am simply enchanted here, almost dreamlike...well done My dear friend.

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