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Still Yet...

I remember your touch,
before it is offered.

Sharing memories
we can't possibly own.

Security surrounds
us like a cocoon.

Interlocking pieces
assembled,
broken apart
yet each time we find,
ourselves side by side.








A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    November 27
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    Blessings~

    Love the direction You took this prompt and the
    Images You unveil through Your words~
    Hope You are feeling better and had a Mahvelous
    Holiday~ Love~ Love~

    Keep that quill & Mind dancing
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Heart
    Best wishes in the contest Sweet One~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Genevieve79
    November 14

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    Wow I love this... "I remember your touch before it is offered" That alone speaks volumes to me! There seems to be a feel of *soul mates* who share a path and cross it life after life throught this! Or maybe that is just where it takes me! Either way amazing write and take on the prompt! Good Luck !


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    November 10

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    so beautiful

    I very much enjoyed your poem and found it simply beautiful, I loved it from start to finsh, it was a pleasure to read and my favorite part was

    Interlocking pieces
    assembled,
    broken apart
    yet each time we find,
    ourselves side by side.

    My best wishes to you in the contest and hope you have a beautiful night xoxo