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Wedding Day

Today you hold your hearts, transparent, for all to see
The love of your commitment
To be held in treasured history

Today we remember the yesterdays
We remember your growing years
All the memories that make up the individuals you are
The wonderful individuals united here

Today is the start of your forever
A celebration of a future so bright
To be here, you have already shared so much
Now together your life long plans take flight

Most of all, today is right now
In this moment, this time, this place
Immersed in the truth of our senses
The touch of your hand, the smile on your face

It is always beautiful to remember
And it is always exciting to plan
But when you remove the yesterdays and tomorrows, all we have is here today
And the love in this very moment... and may you ‘live’ this love everyday

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  • reveller silver member
    November 18

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    This is a very nice poem, full of hope, love and optimism for the new beginning. I enjoyed reading it.
    And thank you for reading and commenting on one of my poems.

    • SuzieJ silver member
      November 18
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      I was asked to write and read a poem for my step-sisters wedding, daunting stuff for me! But the newly weds loved it and glad you enjoyed it too. Thanks for your comment.


  • Amera gold member
    November 9

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    You left a nice comment on one of my poems and I thought I'd visit your house. I'm glad I did! I see you're new here and I want to welcome you and I hope you find AP to be your poetry home.

    This poem is beautiful and shows me that you have the heart of a poet. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera