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Our Dance To Ecstacy

I want to our lips to securely embrace
while our tongues vigorously dance.
The beating of our hearts
being the melody they grind too.
Meanwhile butterflys will be rapidly flapping
their psychedelic wings within me.
In an attempt to break through my porecelain flesh
and flutter away in the soft breeze.
You will ignore my nervousness
as our amour is coming too.

While our tongues continue their dance
the heat within me is rising.
I ache for your fingers to explore my flesh,
not leaving a single inch, left unmarked by your fingerprints.
I long to feel your lips upon the nape of my neck,
sweaty from the sticky perspiration seeping through my pores.
I want you to discover places that have yet to be exploited.
They say there is over six billion dollars yet to be found in the ocean
and I can't help but wonder what treasures you'll find.

I yearn for us to work together, to get to that point of no return.
That point where together, in pleasure we'll scream.
We'll work our way to a land of pure ecstacy,
our tongues still dancing to our now hectic heart beats.
Most of all I want you to love me, truly love me,
until then these visions and desires are just fantasy.
So please realize your adoration for me soon
that way we can make these fantasys, reality.




Author notes

Besides a poem I wrote about a passionate kiss this is my first sensual write.... Not sure how it is but I hope everyone likes it!

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  • Bruce silver member
    November 18
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    It's lovely Heather! I especially liked the treasure in the ocean part! Well done!


  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 8
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    Great poem!!!


  • PurringKitten silver member
    November 4

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    nothing more passionate than a perfect kiss..the tongues dancing, hearts racing and minds lost in a dream of loving the perfect mate...breath taking piece of poetry and i thank you for sharing it with me and for entering...