Life can be a struggle that’s not yet ended
Everyday we just live the beginning
A new beginning to heart ache and pain
And a star is the closest thing to washing the tears away
It brings us light at night and a sparkle to our eyes
A joy to our heart and a wonderful smile
When the star goes out at night here comes the pain
It stays in my heart until the star comes to make it fade away
I have a star that’s out at day a beautiful star that brightens my day
This wonderful star came with a name
A wonderful star also known as Samantha
Author notes
Dedicated to my AP daughter SAM I AM
http://gilad.deviantart.com/art/Falling-Star-42860163
A contest entry
- A Falling Star....Picture prompt by SamanthaSam.
800 points, ended November 6, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
If you view i will know, please comment.
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aww mom, thank you so much. This means alot to me and you wrote it with such imagery and flow and beautiful words. I really love it! Thank you for dedicating this to me and making me feel special and loved. You are so kind to do this. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck in it. Have a wonderful night.
Love and hugs,
Sam I Am
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this is awesome hun you have penned a heart on this.. well done hugs always Angel♥
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know Sam is gunna bawl over this one but it will be tearts of joy its a beauiful poem and dedication hun just gorgeous like you and Sam so bles you both always glenn xxoo
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Beautiful gud luck in the contest !!!!
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awwwwwww
This is Precious and lovely dedication to Sam
Very charming and enchanting hon..wish you the best of luck
much love my beautiful
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..David
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Dang I wasnt even done with the background yet and you already commenting, boy you're fast
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Only for you
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Well Aren't you sweet.
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