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counting







remember that one night

when we made love, twice



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I believe it was three times

you saw me break

when was that?

four years ago?



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more that five times

a week

we would hike all six

trails through the park



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we where seven

when we met



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eight times a day

I'd steal a glance at you



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nine simple words

Id spit out:



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'I want nothing

more then your

kiss,

my Wendy...'


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ten reacouring 
night terrors
nine pills
popped
eight over doses
seven weeks
in jail
six late night
drunken brawls
five rails
snorted through
swirly straws
four friends in jail
or rehab
three months
homeless
two times I
died
but only
one
broken-heart.







I don't miss you.

















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started this over a year ago, just finished tonight.

I hope you understand this.

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Comments


  • boycrazed770899
    November 6
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    Speechless!

    The year was good for it. It is amazing! My new favorite!!


  • pitprincess
    November 4

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    Oh my how this hits home!
    You put together the perfect write.. I have just broken apart from someone along the same lines of your write. I wish I could stand firm and say I don't miss you. I just havent got that far yet.
    Wonderful write!