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You're Number's Up (3-Faced Guys)

I never had to wonder why 'guy' rhymes with 'lie'
Princesses intertwine fairytales and pipedreams
Hoping that happiness resides with what reproduces
Two loves; child, and their inevitable letdown, a guy
(Prince charming)
But behind their naive dreams lies the 2-faced liar

Man, as they call them, make the best serpants
Venomous lies spew out of their 3-faced words
Princesses fall prey to the ideals of a husband
(Prime masquerade)
Begging for the happiness that's promised
But the innocent face masks the lies, told and untold

I do, however, wonder when will women open their eyes
Move forward and condemn the reason of the madness
(Serpant's tongue)
These 'men' live life hoping to enslave women, securing their insecurities
They speak words of 2-faced comfort (they call it 'love')
But maybe, just maybe, the princesses will write their own fairytale

Prince charming dies
Prime masquerade fades
Serpant's tongue dries
'Innocent' liar evades
Princess' fairytale unfolds
Innocence reborn within the princess
(Woman beats guy; truth beats lie)
(3-faced guys, you're number's up)

Author notes

Obviously this is a man-hating poem. I see guys hurt girls every day, so I (being a 'nice guy', as they say) wanted to write about it. "Princess" refers to women, in general.
kenny-streetcrazy

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  • Vampress Alayna silver member
    November 14
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    lol girl rhyms with hurl lol very cool!


    • kenny-streetcrazy
      November 15
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      Thanks for the comment. lol! Girls don't make me hurl, so lol. But that was clever, yea.