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Tim

I never really knew you.
You were just a friend,
but when I got to know
you I let my heart
unbend.


Your smile is extra bright,
and your love you give is
just right.


Your voice is a lullaby
that sings me to sleep
at night, your lips are
a candy so juicy and
sweet.


Every glance in my
directioni is like a
flam to the fire, a
twinkling of stars,
a spark of loves
desire.

To love respect and
honor is your creed,
so you always keep
it real.

Your the answer to my
prayers from up above,
Your the one who will
always hold my love.







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  • sgking123 gold member
    November 16

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    wow

    you tim well with thispoem......you are celarly enamoured of the person called tim..and youe xpress it so well. i loved the desc and loved the poems' flow and words.


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    November 4

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    Sublimely composed...


    Lovely loveful love. This poem sings with voice of romance and sublime notes.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

  • Bob Fox
    November 4

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    Angel

    Lucky man I am sure. Such words of love and appreciation pen by a fine poet. All men should be so well thought of. Great job poet.