I want to dance in the leaves
and the leaves dance with me
as I twirl and spin
around and around
I take my bow
and give my respect
I share my love
for nature's beauty
dance with me in the leaves
let the leaves dance with you
if you're lucky
they will change color
right before your very eyes
be still my heart
it's my turn
the leaves saved me
the final dance
Author notes
picture prompt:
http://xbluepearlx.deviantart.com/art/Fall-100090702
A contest entry
- Quickie 8 poets-One Hour (Big Points) Choice of prompts by SamanthaSam.
1050 points, ended November 4, 8 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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that was amazing. i have always wanted to write about something like this cuz i do htis alot in the fall.. lol.. but i could never find the right words. you my love have done this perfectly. great write.. absolutely
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Very lovely poem. You did an awesome job here for the prompt. I can just see you twirling in those leaves and bowing at the beauty of nature. What a vision! Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest. You did great.
Have a wonderful night.
Hugs,
Sam I Am
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