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f l o a t

Missing image
on an ocean of ochre
where dreams play in paradise
and hearts rest; weary with joy
looking forward to
                                    - sunrise




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  • mgmc gold member
    November 13

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    I love this one! I like the image of ochre and hearts resting weary with joy and then hope on top of that in sunrise. I think this is a fabulous little poem! I like it a lot!


  • marandah gold member
    November 4
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    Thank you Sam!

    You have run a beautifully inspiring contest. Well done!! Bravo!!

    Big Hugs right back at ya


  • SamanthaSam gold member
    November 4

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    Very powerful words in a short poem. I like this alot. I like you using the word ochre. I don't see it used very much. Good imagery used here. Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest. Have a wonderful night.
    Hugs,
    Sam I Am