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Don Juan

My Dear Don Juan

As you walk down the flooded streets
preying upon your next victim

do you not see the harm you cause
For I can see all of your flaws

You then manipulate your charms
Your expressive way of speaking
As you lure them towards your lair
Just as your Devil's eyes are gleaming

You speak of romance and desires
All the while you conspire
For I cannot be fooled by you
Because you still don't have a clue

For I've been down this road of yours
In which I pleasantly avoided
I wish my fellow ladies grace
For soon you won't be able to save face

Author notes

I'm wondering if the ending is ok. I had no idea how to end it. Advice welcome!
And thanks for reading!

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