New melodies and emotion through sound,
I need the voices to make a listener question
If it's coming from the speakers or their very imagination.
I want there to be six phases of the song.
The senses, and the spirit, each harmonizing, and interconnected.
I need the voices of Adam and of Eve.
The sound of TOUCH.
Textured, rough. Abnormally smooth voices and strings.
Eve.
SMELL would require a much higher range and less sinister note progression. Small blips of sound like pollen or feathers scattered from dandelions. Adam.
HEARING may need deeper smooth sounds with a classical beat. Some sound effects of things I find around. Recorded and surrealistically juxtaposed. Adam.
SIGHT would require a much more expansive sound. Melodies of different moods all in the same key to harmonize. Eve.
The segment for the spirit would have to be done by both Adam and Eve. Very surreal. Perhaps almost purely vocal.
The thoughts fade.
More time to process.
Comments
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Very weirdly formated/syllable count. I think the hearing sight thing and adam n eve thing give it a different look that people dont always get to see.
Sometimes I felt like it was hard to get into and flow with the poem. But at the same time, I almost felt like you did this on purpose. It kinda is off on a different level as in you shouldn't have it all neat n perfect. If you get what I'm saying.
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Oh, yeah this isn't aaaactually a poem. I have a new idea for a song, and I just needed to get down what i wanted before I forgot it. :3
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