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yes people I am still alive

you made difficult for me to survive,
even though people I am still alive,
your wicked plans always made me strive,
inspit of this I am still alive,

you made impossible for me to thrive,
but look peole I am still alive,
you attackes my back with a knive,
but you failed because I am still alive.

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  • deedee 23
    November 7

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    godness !!!so strong words...i loved it very much indeed you know ma heart is just broked an i was searching in da poems trying to find a poem which express ma feels an i find dis....really it's amazin,now i just wanna say loudly"yes poeple i'm still alife" !!!! buh i think you mean "knife" in stead of "knive" !!