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paradox

i never know what to say
i only want to impress
i am like a chameleon
in distress

for all i want is you
to smile at my duress
to make an excuse for me
I'm embarrassed

but you make it so hard
making me the fool
I'm fool enough
chasing you

our smiles could go together
turning puzzles to grins
making good so easily of the
no wins

what games there are
round and round
every tree Ive climbed up
i must come down

so i learn to laugh at myself
to let the rain pelt down
to wish no more for
gold by the pound...

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