the sun sinks behind these
thick, southern trees
that huddle together
in a sea of wheat;
I watched the road
stretch between your quiet house
and our sedan,
letting music fill the gap with
some kind of meaning.
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Still smiling.
I don't fucking care what you think anymore
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beautiful, very simply. i like that the image is easy, and quickly defined without rushing. you can live in it, like a painting that should be comfortable, but with some unrefined disturbia between stalks of wheat.
also, i love the colors. i usually try to get my backgrounds to somehow match my poem, and i fail miserably haha so on a very aesthetic front, i can appreciate that. la la
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Autumn is probably the most inspiring thing in the world.
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