Will we ever be one? Neither one wants to say
I miss the way you look at me, take me and kiss me
And yet we both knew things would one day be this way
I’m tired of the uncertain, unattainable, and unknown
When will I know if we can come to that decision day
And when it comes, then what? Will we end up happy
Or will we be left wondering what to do with the pieces that fall?
Though I can only think of you, I’m told to just look out for me
Still, why do you make way into my head like a moth to a flame?
I can’t make it stop, because it’s so hard to set us free
The highlight of my day is now forced to become dim
And I await your beckon call only to turn it away
I make myself sick thinking of the what ifs and whens that my limbs
Become like a tree trunks, stubborn and stuck to what I know and fear
To my suprise you seem like a fish in water, still able to swim
Till that day comes that we make it clear that the gray is no longer
And we either take into an embrace each other or the others
I will remain yours in spirit because lately it’s what made me stronger
Strong enough to see that I can make it through what’s to come
Or strong enough to endure missing you forever….
What did you think
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Very good write..this was a wonderful read full of emotion with good metaphors like:"Still, why do you make way into my head like a moth to a flame?"..very good write yoou are a very talented writer..keep up the good work
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My thoughts pretty near exactly. Something I've found is that it's not up to anyone to "make" me happy - there are, of course, moments of pain, sorrow, anger, anguish.....but, for the most part, you'll be happy when you choose to be. A lesson I learned in short is look for the good, you'll see & feel good, look for the bad, and you'll see & feel bad. You'll find each are plentiful, either way!
*Sigh* Keep what you want in your head and heart - just be sure that is what you want!
& Blessings,
~ Jan ~
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I think you've been reading my journal! LOL! I can so relate to this write! You have expressed these feelings of uncertainty and longing so well! Congratulations on the Spotlight!
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You expressedthe yearning and frusration very eloquently. K enjoyed easch stanza but I especially enjoyed yhe second to last one,
"The highlight ofmy day is now forced to become dim
Snd I await your becknon call to only turn it away
BecomeI make myself sick thinking of what ifs and whens that my limbs
like tree trunks, stubborn and stuck to ehat I know is fear
To my surprise you seem like a fish in water, stillable to swim
The ntire write was greatood job
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I like this. It seems fluid and unforced. Glad to see you writing again -
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thanks babe. i like that you put input on my poems.
and it helps to have inspiration to write, something haven't had that since waaay before you came along.
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