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sweetish in memory

 

 

 

 

 

left me in a huff
writing  scars for life
to read on private

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Shantti silver member
    November 20
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    I'm sorry, I'm not seeing nature here. You have the syllable count but not nature themed.


  • amnouup
    November 10
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    Nice

    Nice ku, a different approach
    best wishes,
    Mou

  • Macsword
    November 5
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    AH!

    a different picture.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 3
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    Interesting haiku. I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest ~gypsy~

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