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Falling Leaves

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Falling leaves,flittering
In watchful eyes bewitching
Stretched across a bed of leaves
Finding myself day dreaming

The crispness in the air chilling
And the winds send the leaves whirling
As they dance in such elegant beauty
I find myself totally amazed

Simply, I love each vibrant color
In many shades of red,orange,yellow and brown
Each painting pictures in my mind
The many stories imagined, left untold

Each delicate leaf remarkable
Mother natures song holds no bounds
Each moment I find find astounding
Softly I smile,In the enjoyment of it all!
       



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Promt: http://taykut.deviantart.com/art/Fall-99025617



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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    November 4

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    This is a wonderful response to the contest prompt, fitting for the beauty of fall and a lovley reflection on how it makes one feel. Well done dear poet, Write On!

    Dennis


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 3

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    this is beautiful hun for the beauty falls on the colors in the mind... send rest on a time coming.. but the beauty lies in the eyes for us to see and rejoice upon the winters beauty coming stunning .. hugs always Angel♥


  • SamanthaSam gold member
    November 3

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    Very nicely done and lovely take on the prompt. I really liked that picture and just had to add it to the contest. I'm glad you wrote on it. Good luck on the contest and thank you for entering. Have a nice night. Keep on penning.
    Hugs, Sam I Am


    • SamanthaSam gold member
      November 3
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      I assume you wrote on the first prompt. You really should put it in your AN.
      Thank you,
      Sam I Am