Firefly

brilliant gems of night
a thousand diamonds twinkle bright
dancing firefly flight

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Haiku Only II by Shantti. 575 points, ended December 2, 47 entries
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Shantti
November 18

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This is sweet! I love fireflies and I could see them dancing as I read this.
I believe the count of your syllables fall more 5-8-6, but the imagery is awesome. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for entering

amnouup
November 10
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Imagery
Here imagery very nice, can see fire flies' flight
best wishes,
Mou

TheQueenOfPoetry
November 6
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Nice job on this. I love the rhythm.

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