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Harmony


your lush lips linger
playing musical numbers
on my silken skin

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  • Shantti silver member
    November 18

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    I believe this falls more into the syru catagory rather than the haiku catagory. Even though it's beautifully done and I love it, I'm going to have to disqualify it based on my rule of "Haiku only". Thank you for taking the time of sharing and entering though


  • amnouup
    November 10
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    Very nice

    Very nice and intelligent ku
    best wishes,
    Mou


  • marandah gold member
    November 3

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    Oh yes,

    now this I can really appreciate, as a lover and a musician!



    Bravo!!