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Song attempt One.

I'm trying to find what I've lost on my way,
I can see my heart and soul fade,
Still trying to be strong,
Finding the will to carry on,
I won't tarry,
I can not wait,
No longer will i hesitate,
Bring the path of fire and ice,
To me paradise was always lost,
I won't tarry,
I can not wait,
To find my soul and carve my fate,
Getting rid of all my hate,
You can't break me,
You can hate me,
Please don't leave me,
For I'm afraid,
I'm too late...
Too late...
And still afraid.

As a song what did you think, and if anyone puts it to music, can you send me vid?

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