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Petals of Promise

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Petals of Promise
withering away, slowly,
soils been tampered with
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Gardener's weeding
sifting through the horrid past
the roots claiming her
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Core of life needs love
and trust for the foundation
the gardener's, won
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Tending to his rose
and nurturing her self worth
her passion
lives on
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  • jackreed3 gold member
    November 8

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    I like that... I have been checking out you websisiht... I just have found notheing worthy to post yet... but it will come around.. I just need something
    sexy to write about like you... or some one... Your King of Hearts...


  • SteveS gold member
    November 7

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    Nice form! And I don't say that to all the girls. Clever, tender write.


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      November 7
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      thanks hon glad you enjoyed it and i do hate it so when someone
      says the same thing to all the girls lol. so thanks for the nice form comment now i will see what you wrote on the others jk
      thanks for commenting hon

  • wonderfully and beautifully done my friend, your way with words is always something that astonishes me, keep it flowing


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 4
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    excellent

    as in all you pen..just purely beautiful Tory..


  • Griswold silver member
    November 3

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    Beautifully done sweetheart, a wonderful Senryu chain. The Rose needs feeding and words of Love to make it through the stormy weather as well as sheltering arms, I'm always here for you my Love... Scott I love you...

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