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Tears Come and Tears Go

Does it even matter
that I cry every night?

By day I'm okay
but the mask comes off
when I'm alone in my room.

Tears come and tears go
but these tears won't stop
even though they don't reach the surface
they're still hidden inside.

I can't take this
why do you treat me this way?
I spill my heart for you
and you act like you don't even care.

I wish you would understand
that you're the only one I could ever need
no one else could ever compare to you.

You're the one I gave my heart to.
I love you can't you see?!

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